Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Formal Paper 2: Rough Draft


Kyle Ordonio
English 101
Prof. Hamilton Salsich
Oct 6, 2010

Majority vs. minority
            The majority in any situation always determines the rules and the minority follow these set rules. Minorities always faces aggression or in some cases are shunned because they are simply different which is not acceptable to the majority. The minority is different but unique and sometimes they rise to top and become the majority. In the writings of Judith Ortiz Cofer, Nora Ephron, and  Eric Schlosser they show how being minority is like and how a minority has risen up to take the place of majority.
            Ms. Cofer writing is a personal one showing how it was like to grow up different than most children in the USA. “I was born a white girl in Puerto Rico, but became a brown girl when I came to live in the United States.” Her skin color made her a minority in the USA and that most people in the US were Caucasian or white. In any place where there is a majority of one race it simply unacceptable to be a different color and that sometimes it also bad to speak about skin color. “Hierarchy for popularity was as follow: pretty white girl, pretty Jewish girl, pretty Puerto Rican girl, pretty black girl.” Even at a young age there where set rules made by the majority and that the minority groups must follow and if they did not they would not be accepted or likely face problems from the majority. What was acceptable is written above and that you had to act and dress like the majority group or be minority and follow your own rules. “In college, I suddenly became an “exotic” woman to men who survived the popularity wars in high school…” As she grew older she became extremely popular because she was different then all of the other women and that men wished to date out of their social groups. Sometimes being a minority is not bad at all and that a minority may have more power than the majority in the near future. This is happens when you are different and that you sometimes have follow the set rules or follow your own path which is frankly not easy.
            Ms. Ephron writing is about a picture someone else  had taken several seconds before a woman’s death. “Beyond that the, pictures were classic, old-fashioned but prefect example of photojournalism at its most spectacular.” Photojournalism was still a very new thing back then and most papers had mostly written journalism so photos were still a minority in the past. She took picture of woman seconds before she died, photos are really the only thing that could catch those last moments before death and writing about it is so limited. “Invading privacy of death. Cheap sentsationalsim. I thought I was reading the national Enquirer.” The contents of the pictures were not acceptable to the majority of the readers, they didn’t like those photos were taken and put on the newspapers they commonly read. The majority of people didn’t like these pictures and there are some who did but most of the feedback was negative off the pictures rather than positive. “That they disturbed is exactly as it should be: that’s why photojournalism is often more powerful than written journalism.” Photojournalism started as a minority but soon became majority because the pictures could capture moments that simply no written work could. The saying goes that a “picture holds a thousand words” and some cases it is true. Today in our time, photojournalism is little above or equal to written journalism because most news articles usually contains a picture and without the picture you wouldn’t have the whole story.
            Mr. Schlosser writing is about how fast food had a very humble beginning but now has spread all over the world and is accepted almost everywhere in the world. “An industry that began with a handful of modest hot dog and hamburger stands in southern California has spread to every corner of the nation.” Fast food did start out as minority in the USA and has grown to a majority in the world. They had to start out following the rules of the majority but as the majority they have set the new standards of business in the world today. “One of the ironies of America’s fast food industry is that a business so dedicated to conformity has founded by iconoclast and self-made men.” As the majority, fast food has forgotten how it began and now seeks to get rid of the minority such as small business and anyone else who doesn’t conform. Fast food has now become majority and as I said before doesn’t like anyone who is part of the minority. “Hundreds of millions of people buy fast food every day.” Fast food has a many customers and this maybe the reason why fast food can continue as it is now, a majority. It is unlikely any other groups will take the place of fast food so the minority will stay a minority or they may become like fast food and rise to the top. His writing is a perfect example of how a minority can become a majority.
            In all of these writings I have seen how minority are treated and how in some cases the minority has more power than the majority. I have seen how a minority becomes the majority and sets the new rules. In the writings of Judith Ortiz Cofer, Nora Ephron, and Eric Schlosser they showed us how being a minority and majority is like and how minority takes the place of minority.

Saturday, October 2, 2010

Journal 10

Chapter: 14

Bourne is saved by the security Guard who he put sleep before entering the bull pen. He then knock out the security Guard again and make its back up and out with Tracy from the stadium. That means united Islam is getting for full out war with the west. Bamber Stevenson tells them all he knows and that he would have to see the files to discern its purpose. He also asks to be able to see his lover’s body and that he are granted protection from the NSA.

Journal 9

Chapter: 14

Bourne and Tracy get to Seville. They looked up some information about the person they would contact for the Goya and soon realize they are being followed by someone. They go to a bullfighting stadium and Bourne lures the bad guy to a bull pen under the stadium, they fight and bull kills the bad guy. Bourne is now trapped with an enraged bull and is badly hurt by what the bad guy did to him. Moira and Trevor show up to a gym to speak to Undersecretary Stevenson and wish to learn about "PINPRICKBARDEM". They learn that Stevenson had relationship with the man who died and that he knew about the Intel they wanted.

Monday, September 27, 2010

Journal 8

Chapter 13

Arkadin thinks about when he was stuck in Nizhny Tagil, Russia. He was hiding form the gain and looking for a means to escape but he had no choice to hide within the city because it would be impossible to leave without being caught. Bourne is now on a plane to Seville and has taken several other planes to get to this far. He has been flying for 23 hours. He has been speaking to a woman named Tracy Atherton. She is going to Seville to purchase a Goya which is a painting and Bourne is going to same person for information on a different subject. He choices to help her and insures her he isn't after the painting. In Egypt things have gotten serious because Amun has called him his entire police force into action.  Amun and Soraya learn the range of the Kowsar 3 missile and began there search in kilometer radius around the crash. The missile is only unique to Iran.  They soon find the area where the missile was shot and have further evidence it was Iranian because of a Iran tradition called Nowruz . They found a fire pit and some food which is used in the festival.

Journal 7

Chapter: 12
The U.S government is notify by their discover y and the president has decided to take action. He is meeting with advisors and has come out with a plan. They will destroy the Iranian government from within while putting pressure on them from all side by using the U.N. Veronica Hart and Moira Trevor meet to make an alliance against the NSA. Veronica and Moira have bad history between with each other because Veronica got her kidnapped before a mission. Moira was supposed to be in charge of the mission but Veronica superiors told her to get rid of Moira. Moira learned about who did this to her and have been enemies ever since then. Veronica comes clean that she didn’t want to do it but she was given orders and had no choice. Veronica also told her that was why she left Black River and became the DCI. Arkadin’s men bury one of their own and his death came as punishment for disobedience.

Journal 6

Chapter 10-11    

 Moira used an explosive on the laptop and threw it one of agents following her into the kitchen. In the confusion Moira was picked up by her friends outside the cafe. Arkadin thinks about the past when he lived in the corrupt city of Niehay Tagil. He killed three members of the gang he was working with, because they killed his lover. The gang response was to hunt him down within the city. He also continues to worry about Willard’s message to stay away but now knew Bourne was not dead. He continues to train his group of 20 men in the same location as I said in my past journals. Amun Chalthomun and Soraya come to an agreement to find the terrorists who shot down a U.S plane in Egyptian grounds. They have been studying the wreckage of the plane in the desert with their team. They have learned that Iran may be involved in some way.

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Journal 5

Chapter 9

 Bourne’s mentor Willard killed one of Arkadin spy who has been looking for Bourne. Willard stopped Arkadin's spy from contacting him via cellphone and after killed him, he took the cell phone. He redialed the number and found out it was Arkadin who sent him and thus a made mistake. His mistake was telling Arkadin to stay away which meant that Bourne was still alive. Moira has contacted one her friends for information in Washington and after the meeting she had one of her agents give her a car and she traveled in a random manner to get rid of any possibility of anyone following her. She stopped at Cafe to eat. She used a computer provided for by her agency and choose to take a look at the information on the thumb drive which to her made no sense at all. It only said "PINPRICKBARDEM". She soon realized that she was followed when two NSA agent  opened the front door to cafe. Willard talked to the good doctor Benjamin Firth about keeping the death of Arkadin's agent secret from Bourne. He said "yes" that he would keep quiet. He was the doctor who saved Bourne’s life and was being black mailed by Arkadin agent about Bourne whereabouts.